“ osteoporosis “

Osteoporosis is a common diease which causes the bones to weaken & become easily broken.it is also called the silent diease because people often don’t realized they have it until it has progressed so far that they break bones while doing ordinary things, such as walking down stairs or lifting heavy objects.osteoporosis happen mostly to order people.once you get to be about 35 years old, the bone density goes down. That’s when osteoporosis usually becomes a cancer & it’s a bigger risk for women than for a men.

Calcium is one of the main minerals that make bones strong. It is also essential for keeping nerves, blood,& muscle healthy.when you don’t take in enough calcium,your body takes calcium out of your bones,which weakens your bones even more.walking & lifting weights,in particular,are great for building muscles that support & strengthen bone.playing soccer,tennis are also good option.

    

From: mohaddeseh taherian.

Hi dear,

I am glad to see your interest in the blog  The information you provided is  challenging, what was your source? Please add the name of the original source :-x

Half of the world

the ancient in isfahan city of isfahan in central iran is know that half world .isfahan rich artisticfor example;khajo and qapo....

 

khago;the bridge architcture for such vasthkam web is extremely beautiful.vlzsh be long 150m is 14vmmbr it is also about vajrmade of ston .

 

Qapu;qapu bulding is 48m andit is  khartfa 7th floor barahdrad .the stairs was a snake it an screw

Ilove my city beacas very beautiful.overall life in different periods battalion  come to Isfahan and as half of the world have accepted.

 

your coming we will be happy Isfahan

(We would be glad to meet you in Isfahan)

    Nahid

Dear Nahid,

very informative  Why didn't you add some pictures from your city? It would have made it nicer  Darling, do not forget to write the name of the cities and countries with the Capital letters in the first letter  

 

faveriot place

Hi my name is sahar sanatkaran

This beautiful city in northeast ern Italy The city has no roads people use boats to travel along the canals once the main means of transportation but today motorboats are more popular tourists love to visit it city

Venice is beautiful city

ای همه هستی

اگر تنها شدی من با توام

خسته دل از هرکه وهرجا شدی من با توام

گر بکنج بی کسی آمیختی با درد خویش

دل کن از مردم دنیا شدی من با توام

الهام کاوه

Ziba & Reyhane beloved place:    

       I & Reyhane like go to the Island that very distance from people. Live on there for ever.                                                                                               

        We like Island because there are quiet & silence& We can enjoy than gift of GOD  that  create   for us. We think everyone can live there for a long time without tired than tediun & enjoy than nice gift such as a big sea , nice shore , beautiful view and etc…

        After we return from Island we want going to MASHHAD.  After a sport trip paste  a riligious trip    

My favorite place

Hello Dear Friends

I am SHADI DALOUCHI

I like KISH ISLAND

I never go to there and I like go to KISH ISLAND so much because this island has different beautiful place I write several of them in below 

.KISH`s beach is wonderful and people can fishing in it

I think KISH`s weather should be fresh in winter and warm in summer

I think it is a good idea going to KISH with our family or go to KISH for honeymoon

I offer it to you too specially for HONEYMOON

 

 

My favorite place is calm place and that is full of trees and flowers. I like to live in hat place. I love some places that have cool weather  without winter  and  summer. The people in there are kind and love together without fighting. I don’t know where is that place but I love Iran will be similar to this place. I love my country and I can’t live in another country. My favorite place is my country , Iran.(Hedie Farrahi)    

My favorite places

There are many village that people don’t know about  them ;  I prefer go to these rural and search about the weather forests homes sea or river or any thing or any place there.

Targhrood is one of this  rural that there is on natanz on esfehan.it is dry,historical and full of orchard

Homes in targh are very old and historical , its walls very short and clayey. Roof on home contain of woods and clay. Each home has many room around the yard . there is a oven between kitchen that you can  bake traditional bread there.

There are many stars in its sky at night that they are very light and big. If you…….your hands you would catch them, farther more  the weather is breezy. You can breathe in fresh air .

 There are different  orchard in targh especially pear, grape , apple …. .they are sweet because reflect sn on the trees.

 I am enjoy that earn knowledge and see village that people don’t know about them but it is difficult because for identify about these rural you must read maps carefully and search them of old men that they have very travel around the country. Some people prefer go to other place rather than rural region.

Leila seifollahi

 

 

my favarit place

i love village a lot because it has healthy air,beautiful sky that is of stars at night ,and it is not    crowded 1-village has healhy air beacause there isnt lots of cars or factories to pollut the air,so breathing is easy and we can breathe healthy air that make feel happy.                                       2-beacause of its healthy air,it has a beautiful sky and we enjoy looking to sky.at night the sky is full stars that make it more beautiful.                                  3-village is not crowded and it has a few population that it make living easy,beacause it is quiet and we have a calm and enjoyable living.                                    fateme ghanibadi

لیلا کرمی

i love going to amusement park

i love amusement park to go wiht friend and relatives، especially youner because it is quite exhilarating causing negative energy drain amusement is rich of happy

 in the amusement all come for smile and happy and can see smile in their face and this is injoyment

 for excited in amusement park person forced to shout and beetwin their shout the negative energy and personlize without pay attention to their problems loughing

i love going to amusement park with relatives and friend and be happing there but not to the entent that duplicate

do you think going to amusement park once in every year or every half year not good?

leila karami

 

زندیه

 Hi my name is zahra zandieh

my favorite place is north.Its very prosperous and of a healthy climate.It has a beautiful environment for awalk and it has very big sea but its not clean and Ido not like swim it.

parisa

Topic.sammer travel1.If you are tired of making vague axcuses for another dull summer at home here is thought to elevate your spirits2.you do not need any thing so redical az winning a lottery to finance a trip to furop3.a student identify card that can be obtained for afew dooars from the council on international education al exchange entitles you to discount tickets on certain charter flights to london and paris4.we can enoy from life with them5.soon you can be soaring in to the skies or skimming over the waves to new adrentures that you will subsequently relqte to youe stationary friends

Dear Parisa,

Why didn't you talk about your own favorite palce to visit?  Also, when you are writing a paragraph, there is no need to separate sentences by numbers. Do not forget to check your words for dictations and spelling.

رویا کاظمی

1. My favourit place is Masole.Masole is one of the city of Gilan.I love it becase it has butiful home,very nice wether and likely bazar.
2. Homes in Masole are realy butiful.They are old  and are made from thatch. The windows  of home are colorful and the vases with red flowers are on the woody shelves.
3. The weather of Masole is cool in summer beacase this  city is on top of the mountain. It has  a short waterful and very tall trees.
4. There are dools that girls make them in Masole bazar and butiful things that people make them.
5. So I love Masole becase of beutiful homes,cool wether and beutiful dools in bazare.    

 

Dear Roya,

you have selected a nice place to talk about and your sentences are very well written  but why have you put numbers before your sentences? If you are writing a paragraph, all of the sentences must follow one another. There mustn't be any number. Also, why didn;t you continue? You have wirtten more.                                                                          

زهرا زارعی

VILLAGE...There are many village all city.Village have a lot of pigeon and coloured flowers and I love the voice of the pigeon.

My grand mather live,s in one of village of the Esfahan.once in a whill I and our family (my family and I) going their house.I saw there very good people and (are) very affectionate.

they have not (don't have) a lot problems, for example: traffic, pollution, illness and accident. (those who live) Who are lives in the village have very very preaty live.I wish live in the village.

ZAHRA ZAREE

Dear Zahra,

How was the trip last week?  Did you enjoy it? What you have written is a nice piece of job my dear You must be careful about your grammar and dictations. You can also give us more information in each paragraph. Generally speaking, it was interesting.  

روز

the where that i like tobe is my home and being with my family.the family is fairest place that have unforgettable moments.the relaxtion wich i feel in my home isnt accessible in any where of world.we are five member.i have a very good sister and a playful brother,sympathetic mother and kind ifather.i amfrom medhium family.i am second child.i like tobe beside my family often.we have good feeling beside eachother at the days end we eat tea together.at night dinner.we usually go willage on friday to visit other families.i wish my freinds send sweet moments beiside their family.

My Dear Girl,

you have forgotten to put your name  It was one of the most interesting paragraphs that was written in your class  I am proud of you. But there is one major problem in it: misspellings. If you had just checked the dictation of the words, it would have beocme perfect. Do not forget to do it and add your name.

Im Avisha sepanlou

I like to live in Hawaii island, I saw many pictures and movies of this island. I love Hawaii because; 1-its very very beautiful and one of nice island in the world. 2- Hawaii has good weather and most of the time is sunny.3- Hawaii has beautiful small and big houses, Hawaii houses has good view, and I love Hawaii because is quite and fun.  

My Avisha,

what you have written is a very very well structured introductory paragraph  but why did you stop? Each of the sentences in your introduction could form a nice body paragraph. 

My favorite place

We have many places that are really amazing, and I think each person has a dream place, to being relax ,have a fun , … and its different from one another , someone like special forest, beach, sea, even a city.

My favorite place is Javaherdeh in north of Iran, in Ramsar , it is full of trees, bushes , beautiful plants, wooden little house, fresh air, and u can smell burning woods .

I prefer to go there in spring or fall, and get free out of everything, hearing to little parrot  , in fall, when the weather getting cold, I prefer to eat Ash reshte, and roasting potato .

At the end in my point of view people should have at least one favorite place to feel calm there, and have some time for themselves.

Mahdis Yaripour.

 

Dear Mahdis,

Your writing demonstrated the structure of an essay Well done girl! You can add more supporting sentences to each parahraph to make it more interesting. Nice job

NEDA::::TAGE BOSTAN

***1/The open space; the tall cypress in the center of open space.perhaps 6000 oldness.Two range trees in the street and...........TAGE BOSTAN.......effect ancient az empire SASANIAN.The mineral spring and lake very very beautiful***2/space TAGE BOSTAN in the north kermanshah.kermanshah is the mountion sity and ancient***3/Effect ancient splendour and great emprive SASANI;inside a huge mountain shahe IRANN....KHOSROO PARVIZto mounted a horse SHABDIZ.****4/The humour...and beautiful.I just you  and famili comes to KERMANSHAH

 

Hi Neda,

your topic is interesting  but you need to pay attention to the following points:

1) You must always check the words for spellings

2) if you want to write an essay, all of the sentences must be connected and form different paragraphs.

3) you could have used pictures to make it more interesting.

Religious places

Im elham kaveh

I like the religious places,because i see tranquility in the religious places

I can relax there and becalm

.

 

My dear Elham,

your topic is a nice one, but it is not an essay  it only contains two sentences. I wanted you make paragraphs. For example, you could have said the reason these palces give you tranquility and provide us with some examples

Best life

I love nature and I like to live there. Mountains, jangels, sea…each of them have very nice weather. We can breathe there better than other places. But hear is a problem: I don’t like insects in nature places because I am farad them. I know it should be like this and most of insects should be live in every nature places! But live with them is really dreadful for me. In any case I love nature and I think it is worth to cast to pass onẻ̉s time in there.

Zahra ghafoori

 Dear Zahra,

your paragraph has a good main idea and you have been able to develop your point to some extent. Yet, there are two major points you need to pay attnetion to:

1) the spelling of some of the words are wrong (I have underlined them)

2) it was better if you could have more than one paragraph, including introduction, body, and conclusion.

As your first attempt is was good

 

Turkmen's culture

Turkmen's culture

The turkmens are peaple that live in the north-eastern of Iran and anywhere of Turkmenistan.
In Iran they live in Mazandaran,Golestan and Khorasan provinces.
They scattered in Iran in the 16th century.
Geographically three main tribe can distinguished ,namely Goklan,Yamut and Teke.
Most of the turkmen peaples in Iran are Yamut and Goklan, they live in turkmen steppes of Iran. the Takes are another turkmen tribe that live in Turkmenistan.
MakhyumGholy and Mataji are great turkmen poets. they writes poem about folkore,culture and homeland.
There are many saying in the turkmen folkore.Old tale tells that one Imam Ali s close flowers, Baba Ghanbar, invited Dotar. He took the fine hair of the horsetaile and made Dotar with them. Dotar is a traditional music instrument. the beautifull sound of Dotar can fill heart with joy.
The horse is very important to the turkmen and is one of the highest valued.
This depenced was much deeper in bygone days. In folkore there are many tales ,fables and adages which tell of horses and their high status.
Children are tought from early age to love and ride horse.the turkmen horse is noble , good and calm.
Turkmen mothers tell their children wonderful tale and sing HUWDI for them. The Huwdi mean is remember GOD and it is full of fine folkorik flavour .
When mothers sing Huwdi wish their children happines and pray for them to have a peaceful Life.

   فاطمه خدایی شیخ author: fateme khodaei sheikh

Dear Fatemeh,

Nice information. Is this your favorite place? You could write about your ideas as well. In addition, I couldn't find the paragraphs. It looked more like separate sentences. If they are in one paragraph, they must be connected .

Affixes and suffixes

 

 

Meanings

Stems

Bio	Related to living things
Logy	Study of living things
Dict	Say - speak
Graph	write
Phone	sound
Tele	distance
Trans	Sen

 

Negation

Example

Ir	irresponsible
Im	impossible
Un	unusual
In	inconplete
Il	illegal

  

Add meaning

Means

Example

 

Re	again	repeat
Bi	two	bilingual
Tri	three	tricycle
Sub	under	Subway,subtopic
Inter	between	interpersonal
Intra	within	intrapersonal
Co	together	cooperate
Anti	against

 Good Job girls, I am proud of you

kish island

I like KISH beacause that is into IRAN and is very beautiful and that is very good weather and very good city I like kish beacause slick place and have very stores and It is  a beautiful Island that is into our cituzen iran ? and I like kish beacause it is a small city and I like very very very good city

My dear girl,

you have forgotten to put down your name  it was good, but yo need to work more on your spellings. What about other paragraphs? You have only introduction . In addition, do not forget to write verbs for all of your sentences. Love

my favorites

Shadi  Mashhadi

I love artistic place.for example

art museum-public garden( with respect  to architecture)-theater(daneshjoo park)-Godo cafe;Naderi cafe-ingeniouses  house.

I am interested in places . people that traffic in places are similar to me and I love to share my knowledge with them.
 

 

Hi Shadi

the topic you selected to talk about is very interesting and also new. I am glad to see your attmept. But, you could have written more (including more sentences in your paragraphs).

                                     ** In  the  name  of  the  must  compassionate**

Hello,Mrs Nami! How are you? Fine thanks

My name  Mohaddeseh & last name taherian .

“happy new year to you  , wishing you 100 more happy new years”

I want to speak a Item “NO-ROOZ” & culture It In Iran For you:

NO-ROOZ, In word,means ”New Day”.It Is new year that start the day.traditionally the exact astronomical beginning of the spring. With It’s Uniquely Iranian characreristic Has been celebrated for that least 3,000 years & Is deeply rooted in the rituals & traditions of the Zoroastrian religion.

We welcome spring with sparkling clean home & a new set of clothes, On the first day of Norooz, our families gather around the “Haft sin” take pride in the beautiful arrangement of seven item that start with the sound of  S in Persian.they symbolize the hopes for a sussesful & happy new day,also incloud: the holy book of Islam,candles,a bowl of red goldfish,painted eggs, senjed, garlic,vinegar,coins, green wheat sprouts,hyacinth flower,sweet pudding,apple & sumac berries.After the saal tahvil peple hug & kiss each other & wish each other a happy new year……..

Dear Mohadeseh,

nice words, if you have used any source for your writing, do not forget to mention the name of the original writer. I want to see more of you in the weblog. Keep writing girl. ;-X

 

Norouz Holidays

Hi all,

did you enjoy the last Tuesday of the year? I hope so  Since we are having the Norouz holidays ahead I want to invite you to write a few lines about this national ceremony. What do you feel about Norouz and Why? You can put your posts in the blog. In addition, it would be very nice if you read your classmates' posts and leave comments for them too  Have a nice holiday and enjoy yourself

Love

Nami

norouz

  nowruz is the traditional iranian festival of spring which  start at the exact moment of the vernal equinon,commenchng the start of the spring. itis considered as the start of the new year amongiranians .the name comes avestan meaning [new day / day light].noruz is celebrated march 20/21 each.year at the time the sun enters aries.[from the saite nowruze persian new year][fram leila karami]  

norouz

  nowruz is the traditional iranian festival of spring which  start at the exact moment of the vernal equinon,commenchng the start of the spring. itis considered as the start of the new year amongiranians .the name comes avestan meaning [new day / day light].noruz is celebrated march 20/21 each.year at the time the sun enters aries.[from the saite nowruze persian new year][fram leila karami]  

مادر

 Noroz is an old custom of Iranian And Some Other Neigboring Countries . People Celebrate It From 1st Day of farvardin Until 13th For Happy and  Nice new Year .Spring is the Season Of nature ,so Enjoy  from Nature In the Natures season .;;;;;;Congratulation ;;;;;;;Ancient Custom of Iranian  ;;;;;;noroz;;;;;;IWish  U and Ur Family Happy and Cheerful New Year  

روز

in harmony with the rebirth of nature the Iranian new years clebretion or norooz always begins on the first day of spring .norooz ceremonies are symbolic representations of two ancient or bad a few weeks befor the new year ,Iranians clean and rearrange  their homes .they make new clothes ,bake pastries and germinate seeds as sign of renewalthe ceremonial clothe is setup   in each house hold [mahnaz