zahra mohammadi

In my opinion, learning a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken is better because you have to be familiar with that language such as accent,vocabularies and prononciation.You are in the atmosphere and are forced to speak that language.Dear zahra,what you have writen is a very long sentence.where are your supports? what makes your topic sentence special?You need to be more specific.

In my opinion ,learning a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken is better because you have to be familiar with that language such as accent, vocabularies and prononciation.You are in the atmosphere and are forced to speak that language . Dear zahra, what you have writen ioa very long sentence.where are your supports?what make your topic sentence special?You need to be more specific best.zahra mohammadi 

Pardis Maroofi

 

Some people say it is better to learn a foreign language in Foreign country which it is spoken , Other say you can learn a language in your own country , what is your view point?! Support it !

Learning a foreign in a country in which it`s spoken , i agree with it ! my view is like first  group because when you are in the spceial atmosphere and you don`t have any way then you just have one way for connecting with people and speaking with them . so you must practice and practice ! you must practice alot because you want to speak with them and  you want to share your ideas with them and you want to be more familar and closer to them . it has just on solution , it`s that you learn their language and you have to speak their language !

if you want to be with them every day and speak with them , their language was repeated for you as yout brain learns this language by heart . It is formal that you don`t understand some words , phareses , proverbs and etc . just asking is your way for understanding them . so thay are may reasons that i agree with this  view that you can be in foreign country for better learning and i think it`s very usefull and gratefull because you practice ,  repeat , reviw , ask and you have to speak and make connection with other people and you must  try! so,thay are main points for learning a foreign language . if you do them you will learn it and you won`t have problems. but i should told that the second view is good and it really helps you to learn a new language and undrestand it , you will undrestand musics , movies , books and other things in this foreign language too .

if you practice it regulary it can really help you. at last , i should told that the first way is  very better and i agree with it

 

 

My Dear Pardis ,

First of all , I thank you for your detailed discussion of the topic . :) Reading your paragraph was intiresting . there are a few points , i want to mention.

First , avoid repetition. the prononn "You" was nepeated several times. you have also repeated topic through on the writing . you don`t need to do that . stating it once is   enough. if you find a way to replace the repetitire words with other expression , your writing become perfect .

Best

 

 

 

pegah sohrabi

In my opinion it is better to learn (a) foreign language in the country (in) which (it) is spoken, because we can learn better related between them. We can learn proverbs in that countries, speaking foreign language with write pronunciation and we can find (about the) culture in that country. So it is better.

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fahime khademi

My idea is that when we want to learn a foreign language it is better that (to be) in a (the) country that spoken with same language (in which it is spoken) because we can make relation (connection) with that language and it cause (help) we (us) learn that language so soon ,but in own(our) country we must speak with  another language and learn a foreign language .So it is better that we go to a foreign country and than learn their language.

 

Dear fahime

Your paragraph has a topic sentence ,which is very good .I liked they may you have provided support and details for your view point .Just keep in mind that you can not have more detail .In addition ,remember that you do not need to much and connect your sentence divide them our use connectors.

Hadise Zare

Some people say it’s better to learn a foreign language. In a country in which it’s spoken, other says you can learn a language in your own country.

What’s your view point? Support it.

I think learning a new language in a country in which it’s spoken where is your verb?! Because the person have to relate with people around him or her and speak with this language so it’s easier to learn it.

 

Dear Hadiseh,

It’s good that you have a topic sentence. But your topic sentence doesn’t have enough supports and details. Actually, it’s a very short paragraph.

If you want you readers to accept your view point you need to bring related supports.

 

Best,

Nami. 

Samira Fallahiyan

I say(I think) it is better to learn a foreign language in a country in which it is spoken because ,people must learn to speak the language . They must speak with vendors  for purchase of stores(shopping) . They want to communicating with other and speak (with) them . They must learn the language to continue their education. A person who live in other country , it is necessary (has) to learn the language , but the person (who) live in his own country ,learning (learns) a foreign language is a skill.

 

Dear samira

Good job! You have written a good topic sentence and have supported it with details . Just in mind that you need to be careful about your word choice . Use relevant words. In addition, aveid repetition.

 

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Learning a  foreign language is very good.If you go to other country,you must speak with their language.If you want to learn a language ,It's better to go  to  country where this language is spoken there.Learning a foreign language between people that speak it causes you can learn language while using it and this kind of learning is very useful.Learning language in your country is very difficult,because people that live with you don't speak it,so you can't use this language in your life,and learning language in this conditions is very hard.

1.meaning of the first sentence and second sentence is similar.

 2.use pruononce  instead of noun.