I say(I think) it is better to learn a foreign language in a country in which it is spoken because ,people must learn to speak the language . They must speak with vendors  for purchase of stores(shopping) . They want to communicating with other and speak (with) them . They must learn the language to continue their education. A person who live in other country , it is necessary (has) to learn the language , but the person (who) live in his own country ,learning (learns) a foreign language is a skill.

 

Dear samira

Good job! You have written a good topic sentence and have supported it with details . Just in mind that you need to be careful about your word choice . Use relevant words. In addition, aveid repetition.