the last year for me

In 90 years I was very good for 90 years (1390 was a very good year) so I figure I eat for my future Badrs stress reading and I started the first 3 months I spent with these exams were held to prepare the exam was well spent. The exam for the Do not waste my time (for the exam, I did not waste my time) I went to aerobics in the gym after a short time I was offered a job. Academic counseling for the first Olympiad in the high school level. I was working for 2 months and I finally answered my concerns less (and my stress decreased) the final exam was announced (and the results of the universities entrance exam was announced) and I was accepted.I came and met with many university students who are now my close friends. I was reading the rest of the year. I hope in 90 years was a very good year for all of 91 years ago is much better....

 

My dear Fatemeh, 

I am glad to see that the past year has been a good one for you  and I hope that this success will continue in the next year too. Now about your writing: I found that you have connected so many short sentences to one another and made one sentence. But you have not used punctuation. I suggest you to use conjuctives and adjuncts more for connecting the sentences. In addition, I have highlighted some of the problems in red. I believe you still think and write some parts of your writing in Persian. Try to follow the structure of English sentences. For example, always begin your sentence with a subject and immidiately bring your verb. 

Hugs,

Nami