The last year that I lived was a very hard year and I can say that it was the worst year of my life till now. I didn't have much happiness nor so much excitement but in very few moments that helped me enough to pass this year without being broken or distrusting myself.

But I shouldn't deny that there was (were) some moments that I really had been proud of myself and I don't think I'll forget these moments for the rest of my life. (I think it would be better to connect the next paragraph to this one as the sentences seem to support your topic in this paragraph.)

One of the most things that made me satisfied was the day I proved myself in front of someone who was very important for me and showed him that he underestimated me a lot and I'm not somebody who is easy to be dealt with.

The other time that made me proud of myself was all my trying to throw away the depression which was made for me and also my fighting to raise my head against the world again with a brave smile and let the time go by to wash away all of my bad memories.

The last year maybe was a horrible day but I'm sure that this year will bring out new surprises for me and it would be happier than the former year. And I say a happy noruz to everyone and hope you achieve success and the smile never leaves your face.  

 Sabokrooh

 My dear girl,

 All I see here is the power of words and an art of narration . So in spite of all that might have happened to you and hurt you, I believe, you must be proud of yourself in this regard. That you can express yourself so artfully in words is nothing but a talent not everyone has. I will cross my fingers and wish you and all of the students in Iran a very happy year full of success.

Hugs and kisses ,

Nami