Hello dear professor and classmates. Happy new year

I think last year was a good year for me(.) alot of beautiful events happened to me but I (was)satisfied few of them.one of the most satisfing action for me was accepting (being accepted)  in Alzahra university. At first I hated it but after 2 or 3 month I became grateful of my god. It's very good that this university is female university. Anothre best action that happened to me was, not accepting me in pharmacy (that I was not accepted in the field of medicine). When I studied for entrance exam I want pharmacy very very much but when I studied chemistry first term in my major I hated it and pharmacy has alot of chemistry. well all of the actions happened to me was good and ful of wisthom and I didn't know. I realize or identify myself last year.                 bye bye now

My dear Reyhaneh,

nice to meet you in the weblog in this new year . I am glad to see that you use the experiences that happen to you for learning more and identifying yourself. I found your paragraph interesting because of the supports you have provided for your topic. That is very good . I have highlighted some of the problems in red. Read them and try to detect the problem.

Hugs,

Nami