IN THE NAME OF GOD

hello dear professor

  1. In last year i had good and bad times.bad times:(the bad events that happened to me:) i must to take exit exam and i studied very
  2. hard and i was tired since times were too stressful and board.(boring) after exam i was sad because i took exam rather bad but i was happy since all were tested evermore and i could sleep very much,i had amusement and wherever i would like to go.(an I could go wherever I wanted) good times: in the 20th of shahrivar my exams result came and i was accepted in biology field in alzahra university and in same day came for me suitor. (Farsi ) finally in 17th of mehr i was engaged with my cousin so we have good mood (??? I didn't get your point here) together

MAHBOOBEH MOQADASI

Dear Mahboobeh,

Some parts of your writing have a Farsi structure. It seems that you first think in Farsi and then translate your thoughts into English. This is problematic. In addition almost all of the sentences began without a captial letter. Have a look at the problems which are highlighted.

Hugs,

Nami