hi

tne (???) best event was being accepted in alzahra university because i liked to be accepted in tehran university and not to be so far from my family.

and as you know that alzahra university is in tehran and it is a govermental university this made me satisfied.this was the best event for my family and i in 1390. 

My dear Samaneh,

Your paragraph contains three sentences which are separated. In addition, none of the sentences have begun with a capital letter and I saw that the names are also written in small letters . There was also a spelling problem. If you want to improve your writing ability you must pay attention to these points. In addition, you need to bring more details in your paragraph to make it attractive and appealing.

Best,

Nami