hi teacher

(I) congratulate the noroz.i hope that the new year be a nice year for you.

last year was very good for me .during last year which has been already finished the most exciting news (There is no verb for your subject so it cannot stand as a sentence: the most exciting event that happened to me was that...) .i've heard was my university entrance exam theat (????).i could pass it.i was accepted in alzahra  university and  i happened good events too such as i accepted in tehran university.

zahra naderi

My dear Zahra,

I hope you have nice year . Your sentences do not begin with a capital letter why?In addition, the names such as Alzahra must also be written with a capital letter. Another problem in this writing relates to the struture of the sentences some of which appear to be Farsi and do not contain any verbs. You must always keep in mind that in English, verbs immidiately follow the subjects.

Best,

Nami