In the name of GOD

Happy New Year

The most important events in the last year (1390)

The most important event that happened in the last year for me is my ratification in university because I come to a new level of my life that it builds my future and my job. Fortunately I was pleased with my subject major and my university.

The other most important event for me and for my family (for my family and I) is related to the university but it is about leaving my town and coming to Tehran and also living in dormitory.

(Attach it to the previous sentence. They are about the same topic so they must form one paragraph) Living in dormitory is a different experience in my life because I live with persons who are from different places and also different cultures.

Totally the last year was one of my best years until now and I thank my GOD for all of these events and I wish this New Year will be excellent for every one especially for you.

My dear Afrouz,

Thank you ! I have the same best wishes for you. Similar to your previous writings, I found this one also well-written. I like the way you pay attention to the use of prepositions and articles. This is one of the points of strength in your writing. I think you could have added more details to your second paragraph in which you talk about different cultures in dormitory. Generally speaking, I did not find serious problems. Well done my dear girl. I am eagerly waiting to read your next post.

Hugs,

Nami