in the name of God

hi dear teacher

The most important event in the last year

my brother`s child was borned in 27th of esfand,1390.My brother`s child is a lovely girl ,she is so sweet baby.I love her so much but it`s so painful for me that i can`t visit and kiss her every day.My brother and his wife are so happy for this beautiful angel that God has gave given to them.I think it is the best and most important event in the last year for me. 

Dear Raheleh,

So you are an aunt now. It must be really interesting . Babies are so sweet, that we want to spend all of our time with them except for those times that they keep crying or one has to change thier nappies . Your paragraph was well-written. Just do not forget to begin your sentences with a capital letter. I am waiting to read your longer paragraphs.

Best,

Nami