Every body has a lot of important things in his or her life and sure one of them is the best and maybe one of them is the worst.(Farsi)There were a lot of things in my life in 1390 but one of the most important things was when I passed exit exam and came to uni.

 

MARYAM NAVAEIYAN

Dear Maryam,

you have only provided one topic sentence, but where are your supports and details? The reason behind writing in the blog is improving our understanding of English writing in general and paragraph structure in particular. I expect to see these details in your writings. I hope you take this into consideration in your later posts.

Best,

Nami