in the name of god

do people couse war and accqot it of some gavrners make conflict for their policy (The sentence is full of misspellings and has a Farsi strucutre)

    • the reasons for conflicts are different for example the weath (????)ofonecountryhuman (?????) force ,oil or even source of waterbut  religion is against fight axcept in a situation that it is talking about rigth or fals e(محدثه صالحی

 

Delayed

Dear Mohadeseh,

There are so many misspelling . In some parts you have connected the words to one another without any space. The only sentence in the body does not begin with a capital letter. Also, the paragraph does not provide any justifications or reasons for its topic. I expect you pay attention to these problems in your later posts. Do not forget to be ontime.

Best,

Nami