IN THE NAME OF GOD

.....NOROUZ

The last norouz was one of the best norouz in my life, because I got married and I was with my

.fiancé on that tide

(do not separate your sentences in one paragraph) We went to Mashhad.  

Thirteen to door was very well, (???? I didn't get your point here) and it was remains in my fiancé’s and my memory

ZAHRA IJAD

Delayed

Dear Zahra,

You need to provide more details about why it will remains in your memory. I expected a more detailed paragraph . In addition, you have separated your sentences in separate lines? Why? Please, pay attention to these points in your later posts and be ontime.

Best,

Nami