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Unfortunately, I don`t have that much information about countries, (in the writing do not degrade yourself. Never say I don’t know, I don’t have enough information. Because when you say that, your reader would ask: then why are you writing this paragraph when you don’t know anything about it?) but if I had a ticket that I could travel abroad with it, I would have liked to go to Saudi Arabia .Maybe it doesn`t have that much nature natural attraction to attract people but Mecca and Medina covers every lack (Farsi) and it can fulfill human being`s eysesight. In my opinion Mecca is the most beautiful place in the whole world. There,human is very close to God and can renew his or her promise with him. Medina is also a very beautiful city because of the prophet Mohammad`s mosqe. I would like to go there and talk to the prophet. It`s one of my biggest wishes. I hope one day it becomes true.                                                      Fatemeh sadat hosseini

My dear Fatemeh,

I hope so! The overall structure is good and acceptable. There are also relevant supports for your topic which turns the collection of the sentences into a paragraph. You have paid special attention to the punctuation patterns. This is also very good! There were some parts which sounded Farsi. Also I found a few misspellings. Watch out for that.

Best,