I want to say if I have won a ticket where I want to go and why?

I chose Paris because of its beautiful scenery and spectacular location. One of them is the Eiffel Tower . I think it is one of the most beautiful master pieces of man human beings . Another place that I always loved to see is the Louvre museum. More than 35 thousand artworks are kept in the Louvre. There you can see some part of the culture of various countries and I think it is very interesting. Many paintings are kept in the Louvre too for example the works of Da Vinci. Even thinking about it makes me so excited.

It was a dream trip and I thank you for it.   (My pleasure ;))

My dear Zahra,

You paragraph is like yourself: neat, ordered, and to the point. I liked the structure and your attention to the punctuation patterns. All of the sentences correctly began with a capital letter and there was no misspelling. You had provided due reasons to support your viewpoint. For all of these reasons I might say that it was one the best paragraphs of this week. Well done my dear girl!

Hugs and kisses,

Nami