IN  THE NAME OF GOD

Travel to INDIAS

?If I had a ticket for one week where I prefer to go

I perfer to go to india, India whit  various weather, a culture like Iranian, and kind people is a good place for travelling.

Further more, India has alot of religions. I appreciate the people that respect other people belives. For example non muslim people participate in muslims religious occasions that I haven't

seen it in other places I like to visit Taj Mahal(.)

My dear Samira,

Interesting place to visit! I hope your dream comes true. You have provided good reasons to support your idea. However, the main problem is that some of the words are misspelled. In addition, you must remember that the names of people, places, and cities begin with a capital letter. Another point relates to the sentences. Why have you separated your sentences? This is a paragraph you cannot do that. Pay attention to these points in your next writing.

Best,

Nami