If you won a ticket where do you want to go?

I like go to venice; the waterways’s city!!!This city has museums that I like to visit go to there because of their museums. one of them is the wax museum that art works are kept there in 10 halls .for example : The second hall is about 900 years of history . some of the statues are: Heinrich Himmler-Adolf Hitler .Thrid hall is about 800 years of Italian scholars and poets . some of statues are: Oscar Wild-Alfred Nobel

My dear Zeynab,

Good idea! Venice is a nice place to visit. The sentences had a well structure but the main problem still is that you do not begin your sentences with a capital letter. In addition, you need more details to support your main idea. You had expressed only one reason. You could have elaborated more on that.

Best,

Nami