If I wanted to go to the trip I chose the Italy. this country has lot of attraction and is courounded by Alp and aptin mountains and Aderbat(.) i see it has lot of church like santamaria and sunmarcos. If I travel to this country I would visit the medieval history and I could enjoy from many parks and seas and other nature of this country. in addition to these Rome is the thristian center and I would get many information about this religion.

My dear Reyhaneh,

You have selected a nice place to visit. You have also brought good reasons to support your view. But I think you could enrich your paragraphs with more details. In addition, there are misspellings which need to be corrected. Misspelled words are a serious problem in the writing. It seems that you still do not pay enough attention to the punctuation of your writing. Remember that the sentences must begin with a capital letter. I hope you take these points into consideration in your later writing.

Best,

Nami