in the name of god

Travel to country

 

If I  had a ticket for one week which country has attracted me for trip and why? Iam a consultant, so i do use it on a trip I perfer to travel to guinea (You mean New Guinea?).Not beacuse being a tourist centre or having good climate . I love to travel here beacuse on my arrival I found that there is no university .Then I was interested to know about the country that why hasnt university and I help them why there aren’t any universities in this country in order to help them. Yes, one week is to short a time for change but I think that I can help  them  mentally for this changement until they, themsleves try for it .Mybe,I dont know.

My dear Roghayeh,

It was informative. I really did not know that there aren’t any universities there. Nice job! Your paragraph contains useful information and details. It is good that you bring support for your topic. But there are also some problems. There were many misspellings. It is really important that your words be correct. Pay more attention to the spellings. Also, remember that the names of people and countries must begin with a capital letter.

Best,

Nami