Canada is my favorite country, because I heard that this country has many beautiful places, like: Niagara Fall, Butchart Garden, Casa loma Castle, and... etc. . The governance system in Canada is kingdom, and it's very exited exciting for me to visit the Kingdom country.

Unfortunately, my ticket is just for a week and I can see a few places. But, it's enough for me that I can travel to this country.

My dear Zahra,

You have a good command of English and your sentences are well written. I am wondering why it is so short. You could have added more details and information. For example, you could explain the places you want to visit in Canada and the reasons behind it. Also, do not forget that the sentences of a paragraph must not be separated across different lines.

Best,

Nami