In the name of God of Hussein

Greetings from God To everyone crying for Hussain.

If  I have one ticket for a week for to go anywhere that is free or not free; I would go to the karbala surely, ;because I do not like anything in the world like this; I go to anywhere but No place like here . I went to karbala for two weeks ; one more (???) at last Arbaeen day and one more at half Shaaban mounth but I like God help me that I go there every week.

I think that every preson that went to the karbala understand what I say...!! (Farsi, you might say: I think only those who have visited Karbala will understand what I say.)

My dear God bring me there please...

 

 

My dear teacher  thank you very much!

have a good time in Moharam mounth!

My Dear Maryam Sadat,

Inshallah, one day your dream becomes true. Thank you dear! It was a generally good paragraph. I think you could have added more details. For example, you could talk about the atmosphere of the place or the culture or the history of the place. In addition, do not forget that at the end of your sentences you need a “.” rather than “;”. Some of your phrases had a Farsi structure. Do not translate your thoughts into English. First change the structure and then write it. An English sentence begins with a subject and is immediately followed with a verb.

Best,

Nami