In the name of God

If I have a free ticket I just go to Karbala because of the real name for this place is paradise. (Do not forget to use the punctuation patterns.)

If anyone goes to this holy place will be surely attract interested in.

I went there 2 years ago in nimeshaban the 15th of Sa’ban and that day was the best day of my life.

One of my greatest desires is to go back to that place.

Inshallah All lovers are willing to go there

  teacher I am so so so sarry really sorry for I be late

zahra medipour

My dear Zahra,

You have expressed yourself interestingly. But unfortunately there were no punctuation devices. Why? In addition, you have separated your sentences. As I have said several times, sentences in a paragraph cannot be separated. I think you could have added more details to support your idea. It was too short. I expect you pay more attention to these issues in your next writing.

Best,

Nami